Choosing Your Words
Words are the foundation of writing. Here's some guidelines on choosing words that work:
Nouns
* General nouns give readers a vague, uninteresting picture, use specific nouns whenever possible to give readers a clearer, more detailed picture.
examples: (from vague to specific)
woman ~ scientist ~Marie Curie
landmark ~ national landmark ~ Mount Rushmore
drink ~ coffee ~ cappuccino
belief ~ strong belief ~ conviction
Vivid Verbs
* Use verbs that are strong enough to stand alone without an adverb and that show rather than tell, descriptive verbs that give a more specific image.
* Avoid overusing the "be" verbs (is, are, was, were . . .). look for another, often better verb, from another word in the same sentence.
* Avoid passive sentence structure, try to use subject - action- object when possible.
Adjectives
* Use precise, specific adjectives to provide a more interesting and clearer picture to the reader.
* Avoid adjectives that are overused and/or carry little meaning; if you can see what you are trying to describe, then use the specific words to describe it
examples:
what is meant by big, little, pretty, cute, fun, nice, good, bad, funny
If you can't picture the word itself in a specific way, don't use it.
* Use adjectives selectively, don't overload a sentence with adjectives.
Adverbs
* Use adverbs as sparingly as possible and only when they will add specific details and color to a sentence.
* Make sure the verb+adverb phrase cannot be better served by a more vivid verb; if they can then replace them with the more vivd verb.
Choosing the Right Words
* Word choices should not only be specific and colorful, but also have the right connotation (what it suggests beyond its dictionary definition)/feeling.
* Describe concretely using the five senses whenever possible: site, sound, smell, feel, and taste.
Style
* Avoid using a lot of short sentences in one place: combine them if possible for a smoother flow.
* Avoid passive writing: make the subject GIVE, DO, ACT and not receive the action.
* Use as few qualifiers as possible.